Thursday, 22 August 2013
Retelling of Red Riding Hood
Once upon time there was a little girl
called red riding hood. One time she
was walking through the forest and
she saw a wolf. The wolf says "hello
little girl. Where are you going?" Red
says "I'm going to grandma's
because she's not feeling very well."
"These flowers are just waiting to be
picked" says the wolf. "Oh but I'm not
supposed to leave the path" says
Red. "But they're only on the edge of
the path" says the wolf. "Well they
are just close to the path I may as
well do it" said Red. And she picked
the flowers. While she did that the
wolf snuck off to Grandma's house.
The wolf knocked on the door.
"Who's there?" Said Granny. "It's red
granny" said the wolf. "Oh come in."
Said granny. "Ahhhhh it's a wolf.
Then the wolf ate her. The wolf
dressed in grannies clothes and
jumped in her bed.
The wolf dressed in grannies
clothes and jumped in her
bed. Then red riding hood
came to the house and the
wolf said 'Come in, come in."
Red riding hood came in and
sang a song. Then the wolf
jumped out of bed and
chased her
around the house. Red riding
hood screamed very loud it
shook the hulls. A wood
cutter heard the screaming
and ran very fust it only 1or 2
or 3 seconds.
into grannies house he went
with his axe. And with one
snap of his axe the wolf was
dead. And grannie jumped out
and thanked the wood cuter.
Then they all sat down
together Happily ever after.
The End.
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OLIVER
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