Friday, 17 May 2013


Autumn
By Isabel
I feel the frosty air as I scramble through the fallen leaves.
The clouds are like a black bunnies floating in the wind
As I trot down the path I see leaves playing in the distance,
Rain patters down,
Oh, what a lonesome feeling
I hear a rushing sound
The empty branches sway in the wind
The foggy air makes me tremble and shiver,
Oh, what a lonesome feeling


1 comment:

  1. i like the way you use simalies
    and i like the way you say "I feel the frosty air as I scramble through the fallen leaves.
    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) from jordyn

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