Friday 17 May 2013

AUTUMN


Tom

Crispy leaves under the 
Bare trees
Mud tracking along the
Class room floor
Crimson leaves falling
To the ground
As I walk along
Leaves crackling
Like fire works
Under my
FEET!!!!
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  1. ncsfive11 June 2013 at 10:53

    that's a really good poem.cam

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  2. Anonymous19 June 2013 at 19:02

    Great descriptive language! I love "mud tracking" and "crackling like fireworks". Awesome buddy. Mum :o)

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