Friday, 8 November 2013

a moment in time skiing

A moment in time skiing I saw a sparkle of light like diamonds reflect on my cold freezing face. I wondered what would happen to me when I skied down the cold frozen snowy mountain. I heard people ski down the snowy mountain screaming like wild pigs. I saw my mum dad and sister ski down the cold mountain also screaming like wild pigs. I went to the edge of the mountain. Stood there for more than a minute then I felt a breeze of wind push me wildly I screamed my breath out. When I got to the bottom I saw my mum waiting for me. I felt so proud I fell over. by phoebe.

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